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watch for me by Moonlight

I've been playing around wiht the climax/end of the story.  I have two pages from today (yea!) I need to go back and move the sory forward - or I'll end up wiht a begining and an end but no middle.  

Maybe I need to do more Jordan/Autumn porn?   

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bodgei
Oct. 21st, 2007 02:48 pm (UTC)
and, of course, Jordan is whispering "I wanna put babies in her. And practising is so fun. Can we do it where EVERYONE can see?"

I have no idea when he became an exibitionest.
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bodgei
Oct. 21st, 2007 05:58 pm (UTC)
Well she let him have her against the side of a trailer outside, on set. Now she seems to be goading him on at a birthday party- so I'm just guessing here, but it seems like her reaction is "yippy!"
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bodgei
Oct. 22nd, 2007 12:09 am (UTC)
I'm leaning twords on the ground in John's back yeard...
mrs_beefcake
Oct. 21st, 2007 01:08 pm (UTC)
Maybe I need to do more Jordan/Autumn porn?

That works for me... lol!
bodgei
Oct. 21st, 2007 02:48 pm (UTC)
LOL!
mrs_beefcake
Oct. 21st, 2007 05:52 pm (UTC)
:)
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